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The three friends' story

Update: November, 19/2017 - 09:00
Illustration by Đỗ Dũng
Viet Nam News

by Hoàng Ngọc Điệp

“I have one foot in the grave!” Toàn moaned. “We’re so old now, we haven’t got long left” he burst out laughing coldly. “Well, still see Hiển, don’t you? In my heart of hearts I still have a deep hatred for him.”

“Shut up!” shouted Nhiên, his ex-sweetheart. “Nonsense! How can you say that? You’re obsessed with death, aren’t you?” she asked him furiously before hanging up the call abruptly. 

Toàn’s incoherent and bitter rantings at a late hour made her quite uneasy and exhausted. Come what may, he was one of her close classmates and, furthermore, her first lover.

A few years before, he and his wife had divorced, leaving him to bring up their son. Unfortunately, the boy died of a drug overdose in prison while still a teenager. Despite all these hardships, she hadn’t realised how desperate his situation had become.

Soon after, Toàn died in deep distress.

At the news of his death, she booked a Hanoi-bound flight. Arriving in the capital, she went straight to a luxury hotel on the banks of the Red River. Early the next morning Hưng, another of her ex-classmates, picked her up and took her to the cemetery to pay homage to their ill-fated friend.

*         *          *

It was the end of autumn in Hà Nội. The cold north-westerly wind bit into the skin and soul. Nhiên had only slept a few hours because of the noises of the night market, the coach station and the sound of the waves of the Red River. At midnight waking up, she slowly walked to the window. Outside, a thin mist came down. In the courtyard below, the fragrance of the ylang-ylang flowers and her memories, sweet and bitter, made her heart all the more confused.

For a long time, her only contact with him had been on the phone. Therefore, his image had gradually blurred in her mind. Now his unkempt hair, with a bitter smile during their last encounter seemed to appear in front of her. But a few seconds later, the joyful and self-satisfied face of Hiển replaced Toàn completely.

“Where does he live now? Does he know about Toàn’s death?” she asked herself.

*         *          *

Last August, she attended a scientific seminar chaired by Hiển. During the morning break, he spoke to Nhiên. “Good morning, my elderly beauty! No wonder, Toàn is still obsessed with your fair face,” he whispered to Nhiên, shaking her hand tightly. She frowned while he smiled broadly, winking at her. With his white teeth, he looked much younger than his age.

“If so, why did he marry another girl and spurn me?” she retorted.

“You’re still holding a grudge? Serves you right! You never paid any attention to me due to your arrogance,” he said with a sarcastic smile.

“Recently, our team of scientists discovered a new kind of plant. We named it Casovo, in scientific terminology it means a ‘henpecked’ single entity,” he added.

“Poor Hiển! He’s dedicated his whole life to researching in deep jungles full of tiny leeches, to announce his study results in public, to enter into pointless arguments with his partners, domestic and foreign alike. Although, he can speak Russian and English fluently and has had many scientific articles published at home and abroad,” she whispered to herself.

On the contrary, Toàn was a different kind of man, feeble and drunk.

“Give up your bad drinking please. You’ll soon die because of your addiction,” Nhiên had once warned him.

“Oh my crazy lady. For a long time brandy has been my parents, wife, sweetheart and children, my raison d’être. In a word, it’s my everything! Without brandy I’ll die. Well, I’ll give it up with one condition.”

“What’s that?” she asked.

“Abandon what you’ve got in Sài Gòn, everything. Come to me in Hà Nội as soon as possible. Forget all your suitors, even Hiển,” Toàn replied in a choked voice.

She felt greatly embarrassed and uncomfortable. Without saying more, she hung up, as if that would cure her ex-lover’s madness.

*         *           *

When Hưng took her along the streets, both familiar and strange, she felt very perplexed. Her childhood seemed to be here and there, under the canopy of reddish leaves, on the rough trunks of the trees and on sparkling lakes.

Nhiên recalled that once Toàn had driven her down this road on his motorbike.

“Over there, there was a hurricane,” he told her, pointing at a cluster of shanty houses nearby. At once, she knew that he meant his house, where he and his wife, a jealous woman, had often argued. Even after their divorce, that loudmouth woman still some times argued with Nhiên. Looking back at those terrible moments, Nhiên just sighed.

*         *          *

In their childhood, the three of them went to the same school. Toàn was a clever, mischievous and talented boy, good at mathematics. On nice days, he asked Nhiên to go with him to fish for shrimps in the ponds full of algae. Hiển was nicknamed ‘prince’ because of his delicate way of speech, his wavy hair and his mastery of biology. In the evenings, on his old bicycle, Hiển went looking for insects and flora and fauna to keep as samples. Nhiên, the youngest of the group, could sing beautifully and was a gifted painter and writer. While other schoolgirls still looked like children, she developed fast. She often went to Hiển’s place to watch him feed birds under the canopy of egg-shaped grapes, and to see fish, small tortoises and turtles in a large aquarium in the centre of the courtyard.

Finishing her junior secondary education, Nhiên left Hà Nội with her parents for a midland town where her father had been sent to for work. She reunited with Hiển when they went to the same university, whereas Toàn joined the army corps in Nghệ An Province. Now in her late teens, she was no longer a little girl, but a pretty lady with the admiration of her two friends. Hiển secretly fell in love with her. Whenever Nhiên took part in a student performance, Hiển would steal his elder sister’s áo dài for Nhiên to wear. Fixing his eyes on her fair face with rosy cheeks and sparkling eyes, he heaved a sigh, “You look very pretty. If only I could enjoy your skills on the stage!” Nhiên did not know that Toàn had told Hiển about his passionate love for her. In consequence, Hiển kept his growing desire for her to himself. He buried himself in books to forget.

It seemed to him that he had been driven out of the courting couple’s hearts

*         *          *

At noon, the cemetery seemed quite deserted. Its large buildings with multi- levelled small numbered niches looked gloomy. Glancing over their photos, one after another, Nhiên felt dizzy. With a small ladder, Hưng climbed up to Toàn’s memorial tablet to bow down before him then went down. When it was Nhiên’s turn, she provided votive offerings as a homage to her ex-lover, eyes in tears.

Returning to the hotel, they stayed in the restaurant for a long while. Nhiên ordered a glass of ice coffee for Hưng and an orange juice for herself. Over the years, he had not only supported Toàn financially, but also listened to his bitter rants about his miserable life.

“Toàn led a needy life, like a skeleton, dear Nhiên,” Hưng said.  “Recently, he became as skinny as a waif. He drank constantly after being abandoned by his wife and after his son died, his physical condition deteriorated fast. When his health turned worse and worse with every passing day, Hiển sent him a considerable amount of money, but he refused it. He asked me to return it immediately…” Hưng stopped abruptly.

Slowly, he stirred his coffee, making the ice cubes clanking. Aware of her unspoken reproaches, he blushed all over. Meanwhile, she was blaming herself, although she and Toàn hadn’t been on good terms for a long time. His pleadings and complaints about his unlucky destiny and even his remorseful tears didn’t move her.

“When do you fly back to Sài Gòn?” Hưng asked her suddenly.

“Early tomorrow, my dear friend,” she replied. She was still lost in her thoughts. Toàn had been through a lot in his life and she had gotten involved in a lot of it.

Hưng left her. Nhiên had a shower before going to bed. She hardly slept a wink. Waking up she recognised that it was already late evening. At first, she intended to take a stroll along some streets lined with many trees to enjoy a cool twilight in the autumn of Hà Nội, then she changed her mind. She phoned Hiển. No answer. “Perhaps, he’s abroad on business or wandering somewhere in the jungle,” she said to herself. She returned to her hotel in distress.

Early the next morning, she went to Nội Bài Airport to go back to Sài Gòn.

*         *          *

She felt warm in her cosy house amid the canopy of yellow flowers and green leaves. Her son had gone abroad to study nearly a year ago, but she had become accustomed to the solitude. Walking into her bedroom on the ground floor, she flung the window open to enjoy the fresh air. After the rain, the flowers in the back garden gave off a sweet smell.

In the afternoon, she stayed in her painting studio. It was there she could find pleasure and peace of mind. Among the paintings on display, there were two oil pictures of a submerged forest with a green hue, several pictures of pretty young girls and her son in his primary school uniform. In addition, there were still a lot of small-and medium-sized flower and still life pictures in pastel. What she liked best was the one portraying a group of schoolchildren evading the rain. In general, they had beautiful, delicate, feminine and sad features which were deeply moving to some. What’s more, they had a soul, mysterious and lonely, of a woman lacking the support of a man.

Nhiên paced to and fro around a room where there was a small wooden case with a little box on top of it. Inside the box there was a pile of letters, a dry leaf and a photo album, all of which smelt mouldy. Sitting on the floor she picked them out, one by one. All of them were associated with Toàn. In one letter, he told her that he was being treated for a wound in a military field clinic. Immediately, she rushed by train to see him. Toàn, with a clean-shaven head, a pale face and a thin body inside his large uniform, welcomed her with a broad smile.

“We have to fix him to the bed with bamboo lengths because last night he convulsed violently during a fever,” some nurses told her with mischievous smiles. She sat down on the bed’s edge then looked at him, blushing all over.

They only stared at each other without saying a word. The next morning, she caught the early Hanoi-bound train.

                                        *         *          *

Nhiên picked up the dry leaf, feeling very excited. Now it was curly, thinner and crispy. It was the one that Toàn gave her when she visited him at his new barracks some ten kilometres away from where she was staying on holiday. To keep herself safe while riding her bicycle on the deserted road across the forest she carried a dagger. 

They sat down side by side in a sweet-smelling eucalyptus grove. With a guitar, he played the tune and sang the lyrics of Those Were the Days. Looking at his smiling face, his thin fingers plucking the strings of the instrument and his black hair flowing down over his forehead, she felt a pang in her chest and thought of herself as the happiest woman in the world.

She dropped the dry leaf into her box then picked up the black-and-white photos, one after another, taken in different places and situations: making sticky rice, enjoying shrimp cakes by West Lake together with each other, and rowing a swan-shaped boat in the blue ripples of Trúc Bạch Lake with his warm kisses. Unexpectedly, there were a few letters written by Hiển from Russia. One of them opened with a few vague words: “To Nhiên of somebody…! The bunch of purple silk flowers with your loving words, ‘Don’t forget me,’ that you sent me on my birthday while I was teaching have become ‘Unable to forget you’. As for the packet of candies, I enjoyed only one piece whereas for the rest, they were given to my colleagues.”

By then, Hiển knew clearly that the love between her and Toàn had ended. Yet, it seemed to Nhiên that he wanted to find out her real feelings.

After putting the old souvenirs back into the box, she stood up then walked to the window. Dawn began setting in with a thin veil of violet mist wafting into her dim bedroom. She had never understood why her first love had ended so miserably, just after Toàn was demobbed. Coming back to Hà Nội, he registered for university entrance exams. Luckily, he passed them all. All of a sudden, he fell in love with a female student on the same course, short and ugly, with thick lips. At first, Nhiên was confused, then became angry because her pride had been hurt. “What makes him say goodbye to me with my sweet memories to run after that plain girl?” she asked herself. Her question had so far been left unanswered and tortured her.

After graduation from university she left Hà Nội for Sài Gòn to settle down. Soon she loved the bustling megacity, with its wide river, its two green banks and her encounters with other young people at parties. After that she got married, had children and led a busy life as a wife and mother. As time passed, the sentimental ties formerly binding them together slowly faded. However via Hiển, she sometimes heard news about her ex-lover. It turned out that Toàn’s wife’s uncle was a ministerial big wig. Thanks to this official plus his fluency in English, Toàn was quickly promoted to an influential post with a huge, dishonestly-earned income. Unfortunately for him, while focusing on personal gain, he was disgraced due to some gross mistakes. Nevertheless, with his intelligence and resolution, he smuggled and made counterfeit products to get rich as soon as possible. His unlawful affairs were almost always protected thanks to his uncle-in-law and he soon became nouveau riche.

During a rare trip on business to the capital, Toàn made an appointment with Hiển at a café. Hiển waited and waited for him while Toàn talked with a known gangster at another table. After an hour’s encounter, when the thug left Toàn came to his friend’s table with his sincere apology. Hiển thought his friend was getting involved in a dangerous affair, yet he did not dare to mention it for fear Toàn’s self-respect might be hurt.

Unexpectedly, Toàn’s unlawful affairs were discovered by the police. Toàn was arrested and found guilty. He went bankrupt. His wife divorced him at once. For some reason, Toàn not only regretted being caught but also hated his old friends. After being released from prison, he started a new job: teaching English to eke out a livelihood. But this didn’t last long, as he couldn’t hold down a job for long due to his alcoholism.

In those days, Hiển was often researching abroad. Returning home with a blue-eyed, auburn-haired Russian girl, Hiển was very excited to see Nhiên. Yet, his love for her was no more.

“Here’s Natasha,” Hiển introduced her to Nhiên proudly.

Natasha smiled a warm smile as a greeting.

For unknown reasons, Hiển soon parted with the Russian lady to marry a factory worker because, in his opinion, he was badly in need of a young woman who would took care of his spinster aunt. “It was a mistake beyond retrieval, for our marriage soon led to divorce, leaving our two kids without a full family,” he had once confided in Nhiên.

Later, when Nhiên’s husband died of an accident, she and Hiển co-habited. They were attached to each other by virtue of their childlike sweet memories, hoping together they could recapture them. However, they soon realised that they weren’t suited.

*         *          *

One day, Nhiên visited Hiển’s studio. It was small but tidy. On the wall there were many maps with tiny circles in blue and red. In the glass bottles she found multi-coloured kinds of water and in the other plastic boxes she recognised the samples of insects, flowers and leaves in transparent liquids.

“Sit down here please,” Hiển told her in a coarse voice.

In a movable chair, she watched everything with sad eyes. Her slim and tall body in dark colour clothes with her pale arms folded on the table stung his heart greatly. For the past days, Hiển did not go abroad, nor did he wander in the forest. At the news of Toàn’s death he did not want to attend or hear about his friend’s funeral so he disconnected his internet. From the bottom of his heart he felt fairly at ease because the obsession about his former wrongdoing had been removed. Now, no more reproaches at midnight from Toàn would be heard.

“I’m unable to go to Hà Nội, dear Nhiên,” he said in an embarrassed voice.

“You needn’t have gone either because the die is cast,” she consoled him. “Last night Hưng phoned me. So I’m fully aware of what happened between you and Toàn.” In his heart of hearts, Hiển also wished that he had never made an attempt to win her back from Toàn’s arms by introducing his cousin who later became Toàn’s wife. But his plan came to nothing. In the final analysis, Toàn’s despair was not merely his.

“Nhiên, I … I… apologise to you,” he said.

“You’re not to blame, dear Hiển.”

Then she stood up and proceeded to her old friend with hoary hair and stooped shoulders, eyes in tears. She seemed to find Toàn’s figure appeared dimly with his sad eyes. They both stood close to each other. Suddenly, Hiển seized her hands tentatively. Heaving a deep sigh, she buried her head in his warm chest. Hot tears trickled down her cheeks.

Translated by Văn Minh


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